Behind those eyes,
I can see it all
There is no difference
Between men and mice
Just don’t let them fall
We jumped all those walls
A life on the run
Baby, I’ve failed you
Now we have nothing at all
Nevermore will we be shunned
(Chorus)
I can see all your pain
And I don’t mean to make light
But in this pouring rain
Your eyes are amazing tonight
Every shade tells a tale
The way your eyes pull
I swear to you
I’m sorry for how we all fail
But it made them so beautiful
(Bridge)
And I’d do it again
The light of day no more
As your eyes bring crystal tears
Crashing to the floor
Now they’re coming for us
Just don’t forget your part
It’s back to crazy town
A padded room will do me justice
Just say no to the medicine cart
It will take away those eyes
I don’t mean to be selfish
But in this place
Where we are despised
Your eyes are like a kiss
(Chorus)
1 comment:
I think to get the full effect I would have to hear it to music (obviously). But I can see where it would have some potential.
Though, I have to say that as far as giving a song about love new life, I don't know that you've done it. It's good, don't get me wrong. And I like it. But, nothing about it says that *you* wrote it.
Best advice? Keep working on it.
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